02/11/18
The response for my composition was quite positive, which was encouraging.
Here are the responses I had from the googleform that Humbo generously set up and sent out:
I agree with the suggestions that it needs to build more in the section that is currently blank, and "JimboHumbo"'s comment that it reminds him of that Arvo Part piece has given me the idea to explore some of his pieces as a model.